Asfuto Aartonader dwidhahin melodrama
chinnobhinno koreche astitwer Protiki,
Idur-dour e here pawa jontrona
Bhirer bukeo jeno ami ekaki....
Taray jhikimiki aakasher anginay
Aami ek omaboshyar khose pora tara,
Purnimar chand jokhon jholsano ruti
Abolombonhin pongu aamar jibondhara...
Jaantrik jibonjatray,anubhutir bandh
Swasruddho koreche bhalobasar kuri,
Britha aasa sraddhor poreo beche aache
Tai hothat jaage nobojiboner sursuri...
Byatikromi chetonar unmeser biplobe
Amar chhaya choloman oshoriri,
Unmadonar Uttorane bara bhaat e chhai,
Dukh-Acid r Bisforone Jibon purlo amar e..
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eta aaj 7th perd e likhlam..puro matah gorom chilo,jhaat jole chilo,gorom e aaro najehal chilam...taar e fosol eta..
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ReplyDeletemy comment : simply oshadharone !! sotti kotha bolte ki aajkal amader generation khujle sotti e khub kom manush jaara bangla k bhalobase, bangla bhasar chorcha kore r bangla bhasaye lekhe...tor moton sotti e hoyto kichhu manush achhe... just keep up the good work... ekta language k kalosrote hariye jaowar sombhabona theke rakshya korar dayityo amader e haat.... kalosroter booke ei chhoto kheyar haal dhorar jonyo...thanks bolbo na... obhorthona janachi !!!